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对于Essay写作，我们不能把句子写的很长很长，因为这样会让句子显得冗长，不符合国外的写作习惯，而国外的老师一直强调精简的重要性，所以我们在写作Essay时要尽量做到精简再精简。那么如何才能让Essay写作做到精简而不改变句子的意思呢？下面就给大家讲解一下。

1、basis

①The patients were examined on a daily basis.

可以精简为：The patients were examined daily.

②Samples of blood were taken on a regular basis.

可以精简为：Samples of blood were taken regularly.

2、case

①Atropine should be available in case a bradycardia occurs.

可以精简为：Atropine should be available to correct any bradycardia.

②It is too early to judge if this is the case or not.

可以精简为：It is too early to judge if this is so.

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3、condition

①anaesthesia under civil war conditions

可以精简为：anaesthesia during a civil war

在描述具体的“条件”或“情况”时，一般不用把condition写出来；condition常用于指之前提到的情况，如：Patients were treated under these conditions.

4、essentially

①The abdominal pain is essentially colicky across the lower abdomen.

可以精简为：There is colicky lower abdominal pain.

basically、essentially和fundamentally这类副词在论文写作时一般不用，即使要用，也多用 mainly或most commonly 之类。

5、grounds

①a heterogeneous group of tumours on epidemiological grounds

可以精简为：an epidemiologically heterogeneous group of tumours

②The diagnosis of epididymo-orchitis is made on clinical grounds.

可以精简为：The diagnosis of epididymo-orchitis is made clinically.

6、nature

①symptoms of a neurological nature

可以精简为：neurological symptoms

②events of a more serious nature

可以精简为：more serious events

③The serious nature of air accidents (air emboli) occurring during infusion

可以精简为：The seriousness of air accidents (air emboli) occurring during infusion

④The hyperosmolar nature of the contrast medium may induce pulmonary oedema.

可以精简为：The hyperosmolarity of the contrast medium may induce pulmonary oedema.

7、process

①Asphyxia is a low-frequency event in the birthing process in developed countries.

可以精简为：Asphyxia during birth is uncommon in developed countries.

②The ageing process can make people increasingly vulnerable through erosion of their coping abilities.

可以精简为：As people age, they are more vulnerable because they cope less well.

8、type

various types of cytokines

可以精简为：various cytokines

9、very

在论文写作中尽量避免使用very。

10、abolish、eliminate、fatal、prevent和vital前的副词要谨慎使用

1）

It is absolutely vital for the survival of patients.

可以精简为：It is vital for the survival of patients.

absolutely vital这一表达不妥，因为vital已经是necessary或very important的意思了，不需要进一步强调了。

2）

①The response was partially abolished in these patients.

可以精简为：The response was reduced in these patients.

②Any leak across the piston is entirely eliminated.

可以精简为：Any leak across the piston is eliminated.

abolish、eliminate、prevent这些词本身就含有“全部”、“完全”的意思 ，前面一般不加partially、totally和entirely这些程度副词。

不过，sometimes abolished、abolished in some patients、usually eliminated、eliminated on some occasions这类表达是可行的。

3）

fatal前可以用表示频率的副词，如：rarely fatal、sometimes fatal或usually fatal。fatal前一般不用程度副词，不过也并非完全不行，比如：Few of these diseases are absolutely fatal。

以上这些词我们已经通过案例来给大家说明确实是可以精简的，而且相比精简之前效果要很多。希望大家以后再进行Essay写作的时候要注意使用这些词。

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